Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, April 22, 2020
Hey guys welcome back, so today's post Is about the titanic that I'm working on In
Mr Sutherland literacy Its not finished yet but I'm working on It
I hope you like It and please comment down bellow
and subscribe. Have you ever thought what It would be like If you were on
the Titanic on the day It sunk? comment what you would feel if you were
on the Titanic when it sunk. Bye I'll see you on my next post (:
Sincerely Ava.
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Hey Ava, Great start on the Titanic slides. I am really impressed with your blog introduction but remember to include a title for your blogs.
ReplyDeleteHi Ava I really like your poster It it is good and all but you do not have sources. Over all it is really good.
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