Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, December 14, 2020
List of 10 foods you would need on a ocean voyage
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Hey Ava,
ReplyDeleteI’m Daniel from the SLJ Blog commenting team. I’m looking forward to seeing all your amazing blog posts and I hope you’re enjoying your summer.
It is great to see you participating in the Summer Learning Journey but I think this is an activity from the 2019-2020 blog. Could you please double check that you are looking at the 2020-2021 Summer Learning Journey activities, here is a link <a href="https://summerlearningjourney.blogspot.com/”> Summer Learning Journey 2020-2021</a> .
Regardless this is a great post and you have come up with some great ideas for supplies for a long ocean voyage, fresh water is especially important and you’ve thought about how each of the other items will stay fresh and edible for a long old time.
See you later in the comments.
Daniel