Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, February 11, 2020
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Ava,Amazing work!I love the colour it really brings attention to your blog! I love how you have put pictures on every page.Amazing effort! I love to feed the eels to at willow bank! Next time say why you are posting this comment and give the post a name. But otherwise Great job!
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oh i just didnt have enough time
DeleteHi Ava,this looks amazing.This was great because you added pictures and you explained why you had fun!i love that your favourite thing at willow bank is to feed the ells at willow bank that's my favourite thing too!! maybe we have something in common!! kind regards Lilly
ReplyDeleteHi Ava, this is Ella. I liked the way you made your background. Nice choice! Did you think about maybe you eating donuts or doing this stuff. Why did you go camping and who with???
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